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Twenty Years Later

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Our walks end
as the autumn spread
In the stars above
In our lives turned old.

Has it been twenty years?
"Since the owls last song"
Our eyes look for us
was twenty years so long?

***

In the barren fields of earth
In the sounds of fallen leaves
Man finds his long lost soul
After so many years,
They speak in silence
Of guilts, of choices,
of love, and distances.

When the songs of the crickets
Turns silent as eyelids.
Pair of starlings fold wings,
In utmost certainty.
When at the end of the October night,
The air smells of sleep.

She speaks up to the Man
Did you find peace?
He smiles and looks
Her eyes only he sees...
I just tried to create an environment, how it would be if two long lost lovers meet after twenty years in an october night. It's an work inspired by another work of same name by poet Jibanananda Das.

Plz let me know with feedbacks on
- What do u think about the poem?
- What do u think about relationship of the man and woman in the poem?
Or anything else. Let me know cause ur feedbacks always inspires me to work hard :D

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tommyboywood's avatar
very inspiring and sweet